I would like to share some writing that I completed in our hub with my friend. We collaborated together by each writing a paragraph.
She was flying up to the whitest clouds. Lightning coming down . She got struck by the lighting boom she went .She saw one of the eggs so she got up fly to the top of the clouds. Down came lightning she dodged the lightning like a ball other one came down so she flys fast like a speedy cat making marks everywhere.
Bom she got up . she grapple the eggs takes it down like a grandma. 
Mystery Egg
The Taniwha was walking to the park everything stopped but not the taniwha Everyone turn into the Self aware egg the Taniwha didn't know what one were her….
The self-aware eggs split into 7 groups and the Taniwha didn't know what one to follow. The taniwha went through all the iles but when she got there they Disappeared. She flyed up to the top of the tower mountain she was looking around but they were nowhere ……
The taniwha saw the self-aware egg so she rushed there. When she got there the seven shiney golden eggs disappeared and she was worried that the seven golden eggs will disappear for ever and she will never catch them ever again.
She was flying up to the whitest clouds. Lightning coming down . She got struck by the lighting boom she went .She saw one of the eggs so she got up fly to the top of the clouds. Down came lightning she dodged the lightning like a ball other one came down so she flys fast like a speedy cat making marks everywhere.
Bom she got up . she grapple the eggs takes it down like a grandma.
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